Sardines Swimming Upstream – Tso’i

Reblogged from my poetry site. Thought you might get a kick out of it.

Ahyoka's avatarPOETRY BY AHYOKA

metro escalator -- tama - px

Going up?
We’re squeezed in pretty tight.
A claustrophobic feeling threatens to erupt.
We’re sardines in a can:
All sealed up.

(If you’re not familiar yet with this new poetic form that I created last year, you’ll find information about it at this link. Maybe you’d like to try writing Tso’i yourself.  If you do, feel free to leave a link to your poem in the “Comments” section below.)


photo courtesy of Tama66 @pixabay.com

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