100-Word Challenge for Grow Ups – Week 108 — ‘Tangerine Tango’

100 WORD CHALLENGE LOGOJulia’s prompt this week was one little word:
“… fall ….”
When I saw it, I was just suddenly attacked by this overwhelming sense of whimsy. I could attribute the result to the fact that I did actually try a new snack food a couple weeks ago that was part of a contest. But it’s more likely the fact that ‘fall’ is in the air, and it’s my most, most, most favorite time of the year. Whimsy is just bubbling out of me!

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By Evan-Amos (Own work) [Public domain], via Wikimedia Commons
TANGERINE TANGO


Now, Doris, don’t fall apart when I tell you this.”

Tell me what? What’s happened!”

Now don’t start. There’s nothing we can do about it.”

About what !”

See, I knew you’d over-react.”

For crying out loud, Melody, what’s going on!”

Well … you didn’t win ….”

Huh? Didn’t win … what?”

The ‘Name the New Potato Chip’ contest.”

I didn’t enter any contest! What’s with you?”

Well … I entered for you. You suggested the new chip be called ‘Tangerine Tango.’”

Well, thank God I didn’t win!”

Why?”

You know I hate tangerines, and they’d send me a whole box of those chips.”

Yeah, and you give me everything you don’t like. I love tangerines!”

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Hop over to Julia’s Place and get involved. You don’t have to write something as ridiculous as I have. We like sensible writers too.
http://jfb57.wordpress.com/2013/10/07/100-word-challenge-for-grown-ups-week108/

3 comments

  1. That’s funny! Well done!
    One piece of con-crit: Watch your punctuation. You used exclamation marks a lot. A lot of times a question mark would have worked better. I constantly have to remind myself how overused the exclamation mark is, and find other ways to show excitement. Tough to do in 100 words, I know!

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