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LEAP OF LOVE
“You’ve GOT to be kidding!”
“Shhhh, you’ll wake your parents.”
“Good. Then they’ll be awake to plan the funeral.”
“Don’t be ridiculous, Annette. You knew we’d have to do something unconventional to sneak you out without their knowing. What’d you expect?”
“Fool that I am, I expected a ladder, of course!”
“Shhh! All right! Forget it. I should have eloped with Bernadette when she begged me.”
He climbed back over the balcony rail and jumped onto the hay-filled tractor bed.
He looked at her, his heart aflame in his eyes.
Her own heart leaped over the balcony, and she had no choice but to follow.
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Photo by Sandra Crook
Friday Fictioneers Hostess: Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. Visit her site to find out how to take part in this 100-word story challenge.
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Priceless Sandra!
Thanks. After Victoria and Arnold, I thought I needed just a straightforward love story.
Ha. yes I can understand the hesitation.. but look what happened to Juliet…
I loved that last line, great job 🙂
Thank you and thanks for letting me know.
🙂 If the hay was baled, that would be a hard landing!!
janet
Yes, well, I admit I took a little liberty with the picture and pretended my hay was just heaped on there.
A fun story!
Leap of faith as well. true love 😉
Dear Sandra,
I suppose if the hay was high enough she wouldn’t have far to leap. I love the last line. And what a story they’ll have to tell their children and grandchildren. 😉
Shalom,
Rochelle
Well-written and romantic story with a great happy ending.
Thanks. I’m partial to happy endings.
Lolz… This was fun!
Nice!
Thank you, and thanks for taking the time to read it.
Wonderful! Very well described, and love must always win. A very nice read!
Thank you. I’m just a sucker for happy endings.