Behind the Scenes During the Writing of ‘Quenton’s Honor’

QUENTON GLOBE EXPERIMENT - TRQUS - w. keyboardPeople often ask me where I get ideas for my novels, and they also like to know the “behind-the-scenes” details of the actual writing. So periodically I share some of those details — especially the ones that I found personally enjoyable or that helped me grow as a writer. The writing of Quenton’s Honor taught me much about dedication and commitment to a project — the kind of commitment that refuses to throw in the towel because tracking down those miniscule details takes multiple phone conversations, some with foreign speaking individuals, and hours poring over dusty facts and figures and then double-checking to see if any of them have changed since I started the research. But it also taught me that even the drudgery work has its own rewards in the positive results of self-discipline.

Quenton’s Honor was actually my third novel, but it was the first of all my novels to be published, with the first printing coming out about 7 years ago. The basic story had been hanging around in my mind and my heart for months before it took enough shape to send me to the keyboard to write the first words. Once I was started, however, there was no stopping. I had to do a considerable amount of research where Pakistan was concerned, and I had to keep reminding myself that I was dealing with a huge time difference between St. Louis Missouri, and Karachi, Pakistan. That time difference didn’t cause me nearly as much trouble, though, as the loss of 12 whole days when I decided — after finishing the novel — to substitute Chapter 3 for Chapter 1.

As often happens in writing a work this long, once it’s done, the author can look back and see new possibilities for the beginning chapter — scenes that will better help grab the reader and get him involved with the story immediately. I realized that Quenton’s Honor would be a better story if I took Chapter 3 and gave it to the readers first. It was a beautiful trade, and I was very happy with it, except for the fact that I had lost 12 days of action. Not to be thwarted, however, I managed to squeeze in a little flashback to grab those 12 days. Of course, I’ll admit it took me 3 days to figure out how to make it all work. But in the end, all was well.

Another editing change came when I turned it over to a friend who reads all my novels critically. I like to have him read my works before anyone else, if possible, because he is very particular about the quality of books he reads and is eager and quick to speak up if a book is lacking in any area. When he read Quenton’s Honor, he loved the book overall and was genuinely touched by several parts, but he was not at all happy with one scene where Quenton’s life is about to be snuffed out by his terrorist guards, and the men sent to rescue him have not arrived. My friend insisted the scene needed more energy and physical action.

Now, this friend is a very shy, introverted, quiet-spoken person, and definitely not the physical confrontation type. However, when I asked him for his ideas about changes to that particular scene, he got up from his desk and began to act out all the parts of the physical confrontation for the scene. I sat and watched him with my mouth open. Here was an entirely different person from the one I’d known several years. He was so energized as he acted out all the parts that he made a believer out of me, and I went home and re-wrote that scene exactly the way he had acted it out. Of course, I acknowledged him gratefully in the front of the book.

So far, readers seem to find the changes I made very agreeable. Any of the rest of you who read the book are welcome to let me know what you think as well —  about the beginning, the short flashback, and the fight to save Quenton’s life — or just about the story in general.

The printed version of Quenton’s Honor is available from St. Ellen Press, and the digital version is available from Amazon’s Kindle Store. The publisher plans to make the print version available on Amazon this summer.

[Background globe photo by Prawny. Used by permission. Edited.]

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The Birthing of a Hero

I wrote this piece last year as part of a 20-minute writing exercise. I thought it deserved to have a post as a short story.

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Matthew couldn’t breathe. Well – no – that wasn’t right. He could breathe, but he felt as though he were being pushed through a very narrow tunnel, and it was squeezing the breath right out of him.

Whooooosh! Ah — now — now he could breathe normally again. But what had just happened? He looked around him.

“Holy cow! Where am I?” Surrounded by buildings taller than anything he could have imagined, with traffic rushing past him just to his left, he felt a little dizzy and disoriented. He shook his head to try to clear it, and that’s when he noticed the girl standing about four feet way from him.

“Hi.” she said, almost bashfully.

“Uh … hi yourself. Uh … do I know you?”

She giggled. “Not yet. But you will.”

“What does that mean?” He looked around in all directions as if trying to locate something. “And what on earth is that racket?”

“What racket?”

“That incessant tap, tap, tap, tap, tap, tap.”

She tilted her head to listen better, and a moment later she answered. “Oh, that. I’ve learned to just close it out after all these weeks. It’s the sound of the keys on the keyboard.”

“What keyboard?”

“Melissa’s, silly. She’s the author.”

“What’s an author?”

“Oh, I forgot that you couldn’t know all that yet. It takes a while to figure things out once you get here, but I’ve been here so long that I’ve pretty well gotten acclimated to everything.”

Matthew tried clearing his head with a shake again. “Wait … what? … What are you talking about? What’s going on? Where am I anyway?”

The girl let out a huge sigh. “Okay. I’ll start from the beginning. Melissa Pendergast is an author, and she writes romance novels. She’s writing one now. I’m the heroine. My name’s Abigail, by the way,” she said, extending her hand to him.

He shook her hand but eyed her suspiciously. “And just what does that have to do with me?”

“Why you’re going to be the hero of the story.” She paused, a mischievous twinkle in her eyes. “And … the love of my life.”

“You’re crazy! I don’t even know you.”

Abigail sighed again. “Of course you don’t — yet. You just got here. Melissa has just now decided who you will be. Well, just a couple of days ago anyway. I heard her talking to her best friend, so I know what the plan is now. She decided to call you Matthew because her very first boyfriend – in sixth grade – was named Matthew, and she did it in honor of him.”

“Whoa — wait — start over, will you?”

Abigail began to get a little irritated. “I don’t need to start over. You just need to pay attention. Melissa is writing a love story and you are my lover. We are supposed to meet on the street right in front of that store over there on the corner. I’m supposed to get my heel caught in a grate at the edge of the curb, and you come to my rescue before a horde of people practically mow me down in their hurry to cross the street in the short time the light says ‘Walk.’

“So I’m in a book?”

“That’s right. And I understand it’s supposed to get a little steamy.” She smiled broadly now. “But I have to say that I’m not at all sorry. You’re quite a hunk, you know.”

“Well … thanks … but … I’m not sure I want to be in somebody’s book – even this Melissa’s.”

“Oh, don’t worry. She’s a great writer, and thousands of people love her books. We’ll be two of the most popular people in the world before too long. At least … I hope it’s before too long. She had a hard time sticking with this story. That’s why I’ve been around so long – waiting for you. She hit a block of some kind, but now everything seems like a go, and I can hardly wait.”

“So, when I felt like the breath was being squeezed out of me, that’s when I was being birthed into this story, so to speak?”

“That’s right. That’s exactly how it feels! But you’re okay now, aren’t you?”

Matthew looked himself over, took a nice deep breath, relieved that he could, and answered. “Yeah, I think I’m okay. But what do we do now?”

“Just relax for a few minutes. I think Melissa just finished the second chapter, and she’s about to have us meet. This is so exciting. I think I’m falling in love with you already.”

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Waking Up in the 21st Century

BOW & ARROW -- QUIVER COVER FOR KINDLE - beige - NARROWEDI don’t like to think of myself as old-fashioned or boring. I enjoy the fact that 21st-century technology has made our lives a lot easier and made communication a lot richer. On the other hand, I do begrudge the quiet time, face-to-face interaction, and just plain good manners in the company of others that were thrown out the window with the adoption of some of that technology.

However, I have faced the fact that the world has changed dramatically during my lifetime. Life is now digital with a capital ‘D.’ So I have finally come to the place that I am eager — okay maybe not eager — but I’m very WILLING —  to get involved in making all of my written work available for the readers out there whose lives are now 90% digital.

And there are so many of them. I’m completely outnumbered. I’ll never forget the day one of my editors (considerably younger than I) said, “Just e-mail me the manuscript.” I looked at him, shocked, and said, but then you’ll have to print it all out yourself.”  He looked back at me with what I’m sure was a mixture of impatience and pity, and said, “We read from the screen now.” I’m sure the words that were really going through his young mind were something like, “You poor, old-fashioned little thing. The world is passing you by, and you don’t even know it.” Now, about 10 years later, I’m finally used to the fact that people love reading words that are not delivered in the form of ink on paper.

That being the case, my publisher and I finally set up shop in the Amazon Kindle store this past week. And several of my books will be available through that market by the end of the month.

Now, don’t misunderstand; I’m not going overboard technologically.  I still have my little flip phone rather than a smart phone or an Android. And I still use my trusty old desktop PC with a tower that weighs nearly a ton. So I’m not going super modern here. But I do want all those folks out there who have been asking me for the past couple years if my books are available for e-readers yet to finally hear me say, “Yes, you can get them from Amazon.”

So, there we have it. You’ve heard it here first — well, almost. One or two other people who are excited about the fact that they can FINALLY read my books while they travel have been spreading the news around. But, other than those few, you readers and my Facebook followers are the first to know.

One of the novels that went up this week is A Quiver Full of Arrows, and many of you who were following me last year will remember it. I had written only half of it about three years ago, and I decided to write the rest of it in serialized form right here on the blog — one chapter a day — until I had made myself finish it. You were very gracious in your response to it, and I’m so glad you enjoyed it. It will no longer be posted here for a free read, however, since it is now in the Kindle store.

If you’re one the folks who read it and enjoyed it, I hope you encourage friends to buy it. And if you were not following at the time I posted it, then that’s a good reason for you to visit the Kindle store and take a peak.

Hint:  If you click on the picture of the book cover above, it will take you to the page where three of the books are already listed in the store.  There should be at least four more in the store by the end of May. You’ll also find the link to my Amazon author’s page in my right sidebar.

Progress is a good thing, generally, but it can also be just a tad poignant. I came close to shedding a tear or two when I said goodbye to my trusty old Canon typewriter several years ago. But I do like the ease with which I can edit and correct text with a computer document program instead. And I’m sure I’m going to enjoy the world of electronic books just as much  — now that I’ve finally gotten myself in gear. So look out, 21st Century: here I come!

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Writing Rule # 1: Use Your Own Voice

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Every writer, whether he’s having his say in prose or poetry, needs to follow the most important rule of successful writing: BE TRUE TO YOURSELF. If you spend your writing energy trying to be like some other author or poet – or trying to please people who do not see life the way you do – you will come to the place where your writing is drudgery, and even worse – you will be a total failure as a writer.

Now, that is not to say that you will never sell a piece of your work. In fact, you just might sell a few things to people who can’t distinguish great work from mediocre or poor work. But you will never reach those readers of the world who are waiting for another voice – a unique voice – YOUR VOICE — to speak to them in forms, words, images, and rhythms that they feel inside and can relate to at the highest level. You want to reach those people. And unless you are the REAL YOU in what you write, they will never find you.

Author Khaled Hosseini said this recently in an interview for TheAtlantic.com: “It seems miraculous, doesn’t it? That somebody can articulate something clearly and beautifully that exists inside you, something shrouded in impenetrable fog. Great art reaches through the fog, towards this secret heart—and it shows it to you, holds it before you. It’s a revelatory, incredibly moving experience when this happens. You feel understood. You feel heard. That’s why we come to art—we feel less alone. We are less alone. You see, through art, that others have felt the way you have—and you feel better.” (“How To Write: A Year In Advice From Franzen, King, Hosseini, and More,” Ed Fassler, TheAtlantic.com, December 17, 2013.)

So be true to yourself and let who you really are come through. Now, that does not mean you should never try new things. Certainly, every writer needs to give himself to some degree of experimentation. That’s how we learn what we have inside and what constitutes our strengths and weaknesses in our craft. Be brave and reach for fresh summits in your writing all your life, but always do so from the truth of your own heart.

In that light, let’s look at a few directives that fall under the heading of being true to yourself:

1. Use vocabulary that is your own and that your reader can follow without losing the real point of what he’s reading. Some writers strain for vocabulary that they believe will impress their readers by causing the author to look particularly intelligent or sophisticated. But the vast majority of the time, their readers become so frustrated with the need to stop and look up words in the dictionary in order to understand the text that they often give up. And if they push themselves to finish the book – or the poem – just because they like to finish what they start, they never pick up anything else by that same writer.

Use words that convey exactly what you mean and what you feel, but make sure the audience who reads it is going to be able to understand it without running for a dictionary. If you live your life in an academic world that communicates only through a sophisticated academic level of vocabulary, then – unless you are writing for an academic publication – you may need to re-evaluate your word choices as you write. Still be yourself, but be the self that carries on conversations with the clerks in the stores or with your kids.

2. Do not become an imitation. Most writers go through a period, early in their attempt to express themselves in their own work, where they unconsciously imitate their own favorite writers. The main cause of that problem is that they read so much by those authors, and, naturally, their thinking is influenced by them. One of the best solutions for the situation is for new writers to make an effort to read a lot – by a lot of different authors. Read within the genres you enjoy, but read outside those genres as well. Sometimes the influence of a writer in a totally different genre from you own can have just enough effect on your own writing that it makes it fresh and unique. In general, most writers come through those phases of imitation pretty quickly, and the more you expose yourself to different voices and styles, the more you will find yourself free of any one particular influence.

3. Write what you believe. Regardless of your topic, write what you believe in your own heart. It’s one thing to play “devil’s advocate” for a specific purpose, but to write from a point of view that is not your own on a regular basis is being false to yourself and to your reader. Even when you are writing on an assignment about a topic that you have no interest in and for which you feel no emotional response, if you force yourself to look in depth, you will undoubtedly find some aspect about which you can write with conviction and even emotion.

4. Be Succinct. You want to say as much as you can – as accurately and colorfully as you can – in as few words as possible. Although we cover this concern in the chapter on using language effectively, it bears repeating here. Work hard at choosing exactly the right word for the right place. Use words that are direct, colorful, active, emphatic, and fresh. When you can say what you mean with one or two words, DO NOT use four or five. Avoid passive verbs except where you want to bring special attention to the receiver of an action.

In light of this effort, you want to make it a habit to avoid adjectives and adverbs whenever possible. Make your nouns and verbs do the real work of saying what you want to say. You also want to avoid too many exclamation marks. Once in a while, they are very effective, but if you have an article, a story, or a poem full of them, the reader stops feeling their effect.

In poetry especially, emphasis can be added to words simply by where they are placed in the poem. The first and last words in a line – and the first and last lines themselves – automatically give emphasis to what’s being said. Sometimes the rhythm chosen will put added stresses on just the right words, and even using inverted sentence order can bring certain words added attention and emphasis. Once in a while repeating a word or phrase is the most powerful way to give it emphasis, but you must be sure not to overuse this tool. Don’t repeat words just because you haven’t spent time looking for a better substitute.

5. If you’re writing poetry, choose a poetic form, meter, and rhyme scheme that match your topic, your tone, and your purpose. Experiment with a number of different poetic forms, meters, and rhyme schemes so that you are comfortable with more than just one or two. That way, when you have an idea for a brand new poem, you can look through your mental file and pick and choose the tools that will make your new piece say EXACTLY what you want.

(Excerpted from Releasing the Creative Writer in You, © 2013 by Sandra Conner)

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Share Your World, 2015 – Week # 1

It’s a brand new year of Share Your World. Why not participate if you have the time. It’s easy, and it’s a great way to get to know fellow bloggers better. Cee Neuner  is the hostess, so just hop over to her blog and check out the details.

Question # 1: How do you get rid of pesky telemarketers?BLUE TELEPHONE

To begin with, now that I have Caller ID, if the number looks suspiciously like a telemarketer, I don’t even answer the phone, and they seldom leave a message. If I do answer, and I learn that it’s someone marketing anything I’m not interested in, I politely interrupt them and say, “Let me save you and me both a lot of time. I’m not at all interested in your product/service.”

If they are polite, they say “Okay” and terminate the call. If they are not polite and try to get pushy and argue with me or try to put pressure on me to listen to them anyway, I then — also politely — say, “I’m hanging up now. Thank you. Good-bye.” And I hang up. I understand that they are just doing their job, but once I’ve made it clear that I’m not interested, they owe it to me to stop tying up my phone and accept my refusal. If they will not, then I feel I’m totally within the realm of good manners to sign off and terminate the call myself.

COFFEE MANQuestion # 2: What are you a natural at doing?

Two things: Eating and Talking — sometimes doing both at the same time, although doing both simultaneously can get a little messy if I’m not careful.

 

 

BARBER CARTOON - BLUEQuestion # 3: How often do you get a haircut?

Depends on the mood I’m in. I’ve always been a person who liked to change my hair — sort of like with my blog. I get bored easily. So when I get my hair cut short, I generally go for a trim every couple months until I’m tired of that style, and then I let it grow out. Once it’s longer, I don’t get it cut until I feel the style is sagging because of not having attention, and then I go for a trim. I guess you could say I’m pretty laid back about haircuts. But I do trim my bangs and the top section myself almost every month because I don’t like the bangs hanging on my eyebrows. And I’ve also noticed that when I’m feeling blah or just out of sorts with myself, getting a haircut gives me a new lease on life, so I have been known to get a new cut just because I needed a change.

APE WITH BANANA - WP CLIPARTQuestion # 4: What’s the first thing that comes to mind when you hear the word “fun”?

Writing and Playing Word Games, like Bananagrams.   (If you’re not familiar with Bananagrams, I’ll tell you that it is a word game similar to Scrabble, in that each player works with letter tiles to create words.) I also love teaching, and 90% of the time it is total fun for me as well. But, honestly, if I had to choose just one single thing that gives me pure pleasure, I would have to say writing.

CARTOON WRITER CLOTHED - editedBonus Question: What are you grateful for from last week, and what are you looking forward to in the week coming up?

I’m grateful for all the wonderful Christmas gifts I received. I was so blessed by people who generously put great thought and effort into my gifts. This next week, I am looking forward to spending some extra time writing on my newest novel Prissy On The Prowl.

 

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A Sharpened Pencil

 

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There’s just something about sharpened pencils – lead pencils, colored pencils – it doesn’t matter.  There’s just something about sharpened pencils that brings out a craving in me: a craving to write!  I’m not alone, of course. It happens to all of us who were born to be writers.  In fact, that’s one of the ways you can know for sure that writing is in your genes – in your soul – in your gut.

I suppose paintbrushes do the same thing to the artist, and adding machines the same to accountants. As a matter of fact, I’m going to make it a point to ask my accountant friends if they feel this uncontrollable itching to punch buttons when they see an adding machine sitting there with a pristine roll of paper tape rolling out of the top and just begging to be imprinted with numbers. I’m sure they do.

That’s what happens to me when I look at sharpened pencils. I have this almost insurmountable urge to pick up one – or more – and start moving it across an untouched sheet of paper. At least my preference is untouched, uncontaminated paper, but when such is not available, I have been known to grab a napkin, a piece of cardboard, or the back of a used envelope. But write I must.

Or if I’m sitting and looking at a cup full of freshly sharpened colored pencils mixed in with the lead pencils, as I was today, I run for my sketch pad and begin to draw. Am I an accomplished artist? No. But I can no more keep myself from putting those colored pencils to paper and moving them across it in gliding, soul-satisfying strokes than I can keep myself from reaching into a just-opened box of chocolate candy and taking a piece.

However, whether lead or colored, when the point is no longer sharp, then I must change pencils. That is the other cardinal rule that governs this addiction. Dull pencil points will absolutely not give me the fix that I need.

So what do I write – or draw? Now, honestly, that part really doesn’t matter where this addiction is concerned. The requirement is that I write (or draw) SOMETHING. And therein lies the only real advantage of this craving: by giving into it, I am put in a position of creating something that never before existed – something out of my own being, my own entity – something that relays who and what I am.

When I’m writing – which is what I do most often, of course – the product may turn out to be superfluous words that don’t make any real difference in this world I live in. But more times than not, those words – once they are tweaked, re-arranged, and polished – offer something satisfying, inspiring, entertaining to myself and others who read them.

And truthfully, this addiction doesn’t require wooden pencils to have its effect on me – or on the rest of us who call ourselves writers. A computer keyboard and a blank white document page on the screen in front of us will do exactly the same thing.

But we are not quite as susceptible to the keyboard and screen, because unless we are sitting in front of them already, they don’t pull on us the way that pencil does. We are likely to run into those pencils almost anywhere. And when we see one – that is if it’s nice and clean and sharp – look out world: we just may unleash our greatest masterpiece on you before you know what hit you.

 

 

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2014: THE YEAR OF THE AUTHOR — Part 4 Just For Fun

Okay, I know I told you this series had three parts. It did, and I posted them all. But then this evening I got to thinking about this quirky little poem I wrote a little over a year ago. And I thought how neat it would be to add it to the series as a ‘just for fun’ capstone. So here’s Part 4 – my little poem titled “The Writer Writes.”

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I think I’ll write a poem.
Type, type, type …
Words, words, words …

‘Twill have to be a story.
Type, type, type …
Words, words, words …

No … I guess a novel.
Type, type, type …
Words, words, words …

A saga will be better.
Type, type, type …
Words, words, words …

A trilogy is called for.
Type, type, type …
Words, words, words …

My editor now reads it.
Delete, delete, delete …
Delete, delete, delete …

I have a two-line stanza.

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HAPPY YEAR OF THE AUTHOR!!!  I just hope you have as much fun being an author as I do.

 

 

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2014: THE YEAR OF THE AUTHOR — Part 2

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PART 2:  GET IT OUT THERE!

In Article I of this series I mentioned that I am currently seeing the doors opening to one of the most exciting era’s of writing the world has known since the invention of the printing press. Those doors are opening primarily in the area of publication.

In this day, writers have so many avenues to choose from for the publication of their work. We are no longer constrained to grovel at the feet of the “big name” publishing houses, who periodically throw a bone out to one or two new writers, but who demand such absolute control of the work produced by those writers that the original creator of the work has very little – if any – say in how it is produced and marketed. He also receives a mere pittance for his share of the profits.

So many of those houses have genre molds that they use to produce their books, and no matter what an individual author is capable of writing, he is forced to make his work fit that mold. Moreover, almost every one of the mainstream publishers has closed their doors to communicating with individual authors on a personal basis (unless those authors have already produced a couple “best sellers” for them). Authors must now hire agents to do the communicating for them – and to take part of the profits.

Now, for writers who have no problem with being pressed into molds, or with putting some of their hard-earned money into the agent’s pocket, or with waiting at least a year to see their book published, that avenue is still an option. But for those writers who believe their work is worthy of being produced at the length and in the format that they choose personally, and who don’t want to pay a third party to talk for them, there is an ever increasing number of options that are just waiting to be accessed.

For example, there are very small, independent publishers all over the world who can offer writers high quality products and help with marketing, but who often get overlooked in the rush to get to the big names. There are university presses that are also a good possibility – especially if your work is in any way academic in nature. And there are numerous channels for publishing your work independently.

Author published books were once looked down on by the market place, but not any longer. In fact, during the last decade, independently published books have made their way to the top of the charts in the marketplace. Author-published books are claiming spots on the best-seller lists and raking in tens of thousands of dollars for their enterprising authors. Of course, books published by the authors must also be marketed by those authors, but it’s also common for authors of books published by the biggest publishers in the country to have to do a large amount of work to promote and sell their own books.

In recent years, one of the biggest markets in the world, Amazon.com, has established programs through which they offer modern authors the tools with which to put their work into book format and the platform from which to sell it. Their original program was CreateSpace, which offered both a free publishing program and one that allowed authors to pay a moderate sum for publishing help. It grew into a very successful venture – both for Amazon and for authors.

Then Amazon created the Kindle Direct Publishing program, which offers publication in digital format – and an accompanying program called KDP Paperback, which offers publication of paperbacks. The KDP programs give authors a choice of using a free program, in which the authors do all the formatting and cover creating personally, or using Amazon’s editorial and production help, which costs a fee. This year, Amazon has discontinued the CreateSpace program and merged it into the KDP programs.

E-books, in general, have become the most popular thing since ice cream, and there are numerous online programs — other than Amazon —  that allow authors to format their work into that highly-marketable form. A few of those are also free. And, yes, there are multiple authors who have independently published their own e-books, marketed them, and started raking in enough money to quit their “day jobs.”

Amazon is not my favorite company in the world, but let’s face facts: it is the biggest marketplace. If the company is going to offer an author a chance to put his book into print (or digital format) and then offer to put it in the online store, what does any author have to lose? Even authors who still want to search for agents and publishers who may like their books and agree to publish them, can still make use of Amazon or other free programs while they’re waiting. They will get their names into the marketplace, get their books read, and get great experience in dealing with the market and with the reading public, and that’s never a waste of time or energy.

I would suggest staying away from most of the vanity presses out there. If you’re not familiar with the term “vanity press,” I’m talking about those publishers who ask you to pay them to publish your book. I have more than one friend who has been badly burned by such companies. Now all of them are not a bad choice. But many of them are, so you want to be very careful. You want to be sure, first of all, that the price they charge is not going to force you to price your books so high (in order to recoup your money) that they won’t sell.

Also, vanity presses tend to take the money and give you a stack of books, but that’s where they stop. If they are not going to help you market the finished product, then you are better off to lay out your own material in the format you choose and simply pay an independent printer to print up however many copies you want to start with. If you think your work needs more editing first,  but  you can’t afford a professional editor yet, try hiring a college student who is majoring in English or journalism. They’re less expensive than professional editors, but generally quite knowledgeable, and usually very careful because they love composition.

Often, depending on what kind of look you want your books to have, you can even purchase very low-priced equipment that will allow you to produce your books entirely on your own, using a staple-stitch, a coil, or a plastic comb for the binding. Those bindings are becoming more and more popular. And when well-done, some of those bindings actually hold together better than many of the cheaply produced “perfect-bound” paperbacks.

One other thought worth mentioning here is that collaboration can be a wonderful thing. If you find yourself just too timid to step out in the beginning — or if even the lesser expensive channels are just too much for your pocket book right now — you might consider combining your efforts with those of a fellow author or photographer. A combination of photographs and inspiring words that match them makes a pretty impressive book. Or a collection of short stories from the pen of two completely different kinds of writers offers readers a greater variety in one book than one writer alone can offer.

Now, obviously, once you have copies of your books in hand, you must think about marketing. If you choose a program like one offered by Amazon, it comes with a package deal that automatically markets the book via their own webstore. If you have your own copies printed, you will have to do the leg work contacting bookstores and other retailers. But that part is often great fun and can make you many new friends in the book world. Offer book-readings and signings in local libraries, local stores, community events, etc. Even an occasional ad in a newspaper is not super expensive and can pay off well. And, of course, all social media platforms offer access to thousands of people who just might be interested in learning about your newest book.

I should mention that there is one independent publishing cost that is somewhat exorbitant (at least in my opinion). That is the cost of ISBN’s. In the U. S. we must order them in sets of at least 10, and that, along with matching bar codes, can get a little pricey. However, remember that ISBN’s are not mandatory – at least in the U. S. (Check your own nation’s laws on this one.) They are extremely helpful in marketing books, but many local bookstore owners prefer adding their own bar codes to the books from their own accounting system, and will often willingly offer a local author’s book as part of their stock without an ISBN. There are definite advantages to having the ISBN, of course, especially as it allows your books to be listed in a huge directory of books available to the general marketplace. If you choose to work with a publishing house or one of the programs offered by Amazon, those publishing platforms will take care of assigning ISBN’s for you if you wish.

Another publishing avenue that has worked for some authors is to offer their work (whether short stories, essays, poems, or novels broken up into chapters) to periodicals. Many a great novel has seen its first audience via the pages of a magazine or newspaper that offered the story one chapter at a time, and then went on to win itself a place on the best-seller lists. There are also multiple online magazines that offer stories/articles by free-lance writers, and like e-books, online periodicals are definitely here to stay.

Personal essays and memoirs have reached a new level of popularity in the last decade, and the marketplace has a healthy list of periodicals – both in print and online – that are open to submissions from unknown authors. Many are even seeking new authors to add to their list of contributors. Then, of course, there are all the specialty periodicals like travel journals, food journals, home improvement journals, and magazines that focus on sewing, hunting, social/political issues, etc, etc. The list is almost endless, and a few searches online for “periodicals currently accepting submissions” will glean several sites to check out.

What about copyright? Most people are not aware of this fact, but in the U.S. (Check your own nation’s laws) as soon as you complete a work, that work is considered under copyright to you. There is no need to send copies anywhere or pay any government office to file the work and send you a verification. The work is copyrighted, and it is your responsibility to post the copyright emblem and date with every published copy of that work.

Now, you can send your work into the copyright office and have it registered for a fee. When you do that, the office then has a record of the date they received it, and should you ever want to take someone to court for infringement of your copyright, the copyright office can supply documentation of your authorship from that date. Some authors choose other ways to document their authorship. For example, they mail themselves a copy of the manuscript so that it is postmarked with a certain date, and if unopened, they consider that to be valid proof of their original authorship. Whether or not a court would allow that kind of “proof” remains to be seen.

But the point here is that you do not have to “pay” for the copyright privileges for your work in the U. S. They are automatically guaranteed by the government upon the moment of completion of your work. One other point of note: In the U.S., there is a law requiring every author (or publisher) to send two copies of any work published in the U. S. to the Library of Congress. There is no charge for this action, but it is technically required by law and can result in a fine if the author does not comply with it.

One other note concerning copyright is important to understand. If you are hired by a newspaper or other periodical to write a specific article/essay/story, that periodical generally considers the copyright for that piece to be theirs. You are actually doing what is termed “work-for-hire,” and because you have been specifically assigned to write that particular piece for that specific publication – and are being paid to do so – the publication owns the copyright. So if you decide to write for any periodicals, be sure to find out ahead of time what their policy is concerning the copyright of your material. Even if their standard policy is for them to maintain the copyright, you may be able to work out a deal for specific articles if maintaining the copyright for those particular pieces is important to you.

Of course, the publishing ideas and suggestions presented here are just that: ideas and suggestions. You may have other ideas of your own that work just as well or better. The main purpose of this second article in the “Year of the Author” series is to get you started thinking about getting your work “out there” for people to read and enjoy.

If you prefer a mainstream publisher, by all means, contact them, but if you find yourself waiting for years — or wading through a pile of rejection letters — you might consider starting with one of the other publishing alternatives. (And by the way, just because some people say your book is not acceptable for publication doesn’t mean that it isn’t. Some of the most-loved and best-selling novels in the world were rejected multiple times before they ever found a place on the bookstore shelves.)

But whether you lean toward the big names in publishing houses or not, get rid of the stigma that used to be attached to author-published books. Many of the best-known authors in the world published their own work at one time or another. And many of the best-selling authors on the market today began by publishing their first books themselves. In fact, a few who are already published authors are now moving in the direction of publishing independently because of the greater control and greater profit that method offers.

For other information about the various open doors to publishing, go online and type in a couple well-worded questions about the subject. One place that generally has a plethora of information is the Writer’s Digest website. That might be one of your best starting places.

Bottom line here: Get your work out into the hands of the public! I’m encouraging each and every one of you who knows you have something to say, through words or pictures or both, to share it with the rest of the world. Dig out that manuscript that has been collecting dust — or pull together several dozen of the stories/poems you’ve posted on your blog – or assemble a collection of your best photographs along with inspiring captions — or sit down and actually write that novel or memoir you’ve been thinking about for years – and get it out there! Your readers are waiting!


Part 3: “Power In Them There Words”

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2014: THE YEAR OF THE AUTHOR – Part 1

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Hear Ye!  Hear Ye!  I am deliberately, and with significant forethought, declaring 2014 to be ‘The Year of the Author’!  Who am I to have the authority to make such a declaration???  Well, for starters, I am an author, and who better to declare that this is my year than I?  But I am not simply an author; I am also a writing teacher, an editor, a publisher, a journalist, a columnist, a poet, an essayist ….  One might say that I have worn all the various hats of the writing world at one time or another, and I am currently seeing the doors opening to one of the most exciting era’s of writing the world has known since the invention of the printing press.

Unfortunately, I am also seeing and talking with many writers who have been through an extremely discouraging year and who are about to lose their vision and the thrill of writing. This article, then is the first in a three-part inspirational series on writing and publishing that I hope will renew that vision and that thrill. I am not trying to cover all the bases or give a seriously academic lecture. Nor am I going to post long lists of sites to contact. You are very capable of going online and finding information for yourself. I am merely wanting to light a fire and create a beacon at the beginning of this magnificent year that lies ahead of us. I want to stir up the author in you to come forth and make his voice heard — loud and strong — this year!

PART 1: SO YOU WANT TO BE A WRITER

(This first article is a re-post of a portion of my writing curriculum Releasing the Creative Writer in You. I posted it on here about a year ago, but I hope it will stir you once again to move forward in your own writing.)

So you want to be a writer? Then DO IT!

Mystery author Agatha Christie once said, “The best time for planning a book is while you’re doing the dishes.” There’s a lot of wisdom in that statement.

You know, you don’t have to live a weird life — or even a particularly exciting life — to be a great author. In fact you can live a very ordinary, chicken-frying, auto-repairing, laundry-washing, diaper-changing kind of life and still write books that will lift people out of the ordinary and into a place where imaginations rise to peak places, where new dreams are ignited, and where hope and faith bring victory into life’s struggles.

So pick up that pen, sit down to that computer keyboard, or start dictating into that recorder — whatever method works for you.  If you’re sure you want to write, START WRITING.

Now that you’ve started, you come to your next decision. Do you want to be an “occasional writer” – sharing an idea or a complaint only now and then – when the mood strikes you? Or do you want to be a “serious writer” – making writing one of your primary goals in life and, therefore, at the top of your list of priorities.? If your answer is the first option, then you are free to write or not, depending on how you feel on any particular day. However, even in that situation, the more you write, the better you will be at it when you feel it counts.

But if you are serious about writing – if you feel it is a necessary part of your feeling successful in your life – then you must live by a different law: You must commit to writing on a regular basis and stick with the program, regardless of how you feel on any particular day – or how anyone else feels about your work.

Unfortunately, this decision to be a serious writer must be made anew every few days. The “new” wears off after a while. The excitement turns to frustration after several days of reaching for just the write words and falling short time after time. The bright ideas seem to fade a little when the family and friends don’t find your first chapter exciting enough to want to listen to you talk about it for three hours non-stop. But if you really do want to write, you must make yourself write faithfully and regularly, regardless of the struggles involved. If you sit at your keyboard three hours and type onto the screen only one sentence worth keeping, you have accomplished writing a sentence that never existed before.

And therein lies the intrinsic value of writing. Everyone who writes becomes a creator. Once you have written an original piece – no matter how small or how large – you have created something that never before existed!  That fact is not dependent upon whether anyone else reads it.  Or whether anyone else likes it if they do read it. The proof of your creativity does not rest in your work’s boasting a publisher’s imprint or finding a place on a bookstore shelf.  Get this straight: once you have written an original piece, you have created an entity that never before existed. I repeat that point because it is a powerful reality that very few writers recognize.

And another related fact that many unpublished writers seem to miss is that once you have created a written product, you are a writer. You’re not “going to be” a writer. You’re not a “would-be” writer. You’re not an “aspiring” writer. You are a writer. You are an author. You are a creator. When you do recognize these two truth, they will empower you to keep creating and to create even more effectively.

Also, once you recognize them, you will come to realize a third truth that is just as important: As a writer, you have a heavy responsibility to your readers. From the moment an individual picks up your work and reads the first sentence, you begin to influence that person – for good or evil. And the more of your work people read, the greater your influence grows.

So it is important to remember that, although you may feel you are writing for yourself, if you intend to allow your work to be read by anyone else at all, you are responsible for what that work does to influence that reader. There is a passage in the Bible, Luke 12:48, that says, “For unto whomsoever much is given, of him shall be much required.”

Although the statement is found within the pages of Scripture, it is a truth outside of those pages as well. One does not have to be of the Christian faith to recognize the validity of the point being made. In accordance with that law of life, when we are endowed with the powerful gifts and talents that allow us to create through the written word, we then become accountable for what we do with that word.*

We’ll talk just a little more about that point later, but for now, let’s turn to Part II of this series — “Get It Out There!” — coming up in my next post.

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*(Releasing the Creative Writer in You © 2013 Sandra Conner)

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WordPress Daily Prompt: Without

Life without a computer?  Well the story I wrote a few months ago for Julia’s 100-Word Challenge for Grownups takes things one step further, but I think it fits the requirement of the prompt nicely:

QUILL & SCROLL - sepiaThe Written Word

The quills were ancient. She’d found them locked in a closet of the abby. But the points were sharp, the monks having taken great care of them.

Mara sighed.  Remember, Robert? … Computers and photocopiers?  It was all so easy?”

Yeah … life before the E-bombs. Who would have dreamed our electronic infrastructure was so unprotected!”

If the new dictator hadn’t confiscated all the manual typewriters and pencils as well, we could at least communicate to some extent!”

Picking up a quill, Robert replied: “Well, this is how our ancestors printed letters and books. We come from the same stock. So –” dipping his quill into the ink – “let’s get started.”
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Take part in the fun at this site: http://dailypost.wordpress.com/2013/07/28/daily-prompt-without/

In Memorium: Vince Flynn

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Image courtesy of Vince Flynn website

I learned some exceedingly sad news this week. One of my favorite authors passed from this life four days ago, at the age of 47 and at the height of his writing career. Vince Flynn, an American author whose books have sold over 15 million copies in the U. S. and millions more worldwide, has been an encouragement and a challenging example to me personally in my endeavors to reach out to the world through the written word. 

I cannot put into accurate words the sadness I feel at learning of Vince Flynn’s death. He was, without a doubt, one of the most talented and most morally responsible writers to grace the halls of American literature in this generation. He was a true patriot and, through his work, shared that love of our nation and all it stands for with his millions of readers.

He also stands as a beacon of personal commitment to a goal — and as a beacon of ingenuity and enterprise that is offered to citizens of this nation — in that he was determined to succeed in getting his words to the reading public and would not take ‘no’ for an answer. Although diagnosed as dyslexic during his school years, he did not let that problem deter him from reaching for his goal. Although turned down by the Marine Corps because of a physical problem, he sought for and found a way to serve this nation through his writing.

As an author who self-published his first book — after scores of rejections of the same —  he went on to become one of the best selling authors of this generation. He is a powerful encouragement to others to pursue their dreams and never give up. My heart goes out to his family, and I do share their grief at losing such a valuable man.

A couple of years ago, I wrote a newspaper column concerning books and their lasting value in our lives. I also shared some of my personal experiences as an author who has enjoyed hearing from people who have been profoundly touched and moved by my stories. In connection with that experience, I wrote about Vince Flynn – in a rather light-hearted way – but my words were totally honest. In memory of this gifted man and his work, I’d like to share those words again right now:

“I’m a Vince Flynn fan. In my opinion, he literally “wrote the book” on high-concept political intrigue.  Now, of course, when I’m in need of something warm and fuzzy to read – something that will allow me to escape this cruel, cold world – I definitely don’t run to Vince. But when I want something I can get my teeth into – something that involves every bit of me in the story – he’s my man.

“Every sentence is packed, and for that reason, I find it almost impossible to put his books down once I start reading.  I look at the clock at 1:00 a.m. and tell myself I’ll read just to the end of the chapter. Then at 2:00 a.m. I reassure my conscience that I’ll read just one more page. And I do. Then I read one more page … and one more page … until I find myself at 3:00 a.m., facing an unforgiving alarm clock that’s set to go off in three more hours.

“So I’ve been thinking: Perhaps I’ll set another goal for myself that will help me measure my success as an author – as I see it. I think I’ll aim for writing a novel that will keep Vince Flynn up until 3:00 a.m. and make him feel guilty. Yes. That sounds like a good idea. I’ll start right now – if I can just stay awake ….”

Sadly, of course, that goal is no longer achievable, since Mr. Flynn has left us. But personally, I will still hold onto that thought, and although I will see it through tears, I will nevertheless see it as a beacon and a challenge that leads me in my efforts to write stories that will get hold of people and not let go. I believe I have something important to say in the stories I write — as did Vince Flynn — and I am enormously grateful for his example that remains here with us in all of the masterful work he has given us.

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You Say You Want To Be A Writer?

CARTOON WRITER CLOTHED - editedYou say you want to be a writer? Then START WRITING!

Mystery author Agatha Christie once said, “The best time for planning a book is while you’re doing the dishes.” There’s a lot of wisdom in that statement.

You know, you don’t have to live a weird life — or even a particularly exciting life — to be a great author. In fact you can live a very ordinary, chicken-frying, auto-repairing, laundry-washing, diaper-changing kind of life and still write books that will lift people out of the ordinary and into a place where imaginations rise to peak places, where new dreams are ignited, and where hope and faith bring victory into life’s struggles.

So pick up that pen, sit down to that keyboard, or start dictating into that recorder — whatever method works for you.  If you’re sure you want to write, START WRITING. 

 

BLACK TYPEWRITER - sepia regular sizeNow that you’ve started, you come to your next decision. Do you want to be an “occasional writer” – sharing an idea or a complaint only now and then – when the mood strikes you? Or do you want to be a “serious writer” – making writing one of your primary goals in life and, therefore, at the top of your list of priorities.? If your answer is the first option, then you are free to write or not, depending on how you feel on any particular day. However, even in that situation, the more you write, the better you will be at it when you feel it counts.

But if you are serious about writing – if you feel it is a necessary part of your feeling successful in your life – then you must live by a different law: You must commit to writing on a regular basis and stick with the program, regardless of how you feel on any particular day – or how anyone else feels about your work.

Unfortunately, this decision to be a serious writer must be made anew every few days. The “new” wears off after a while. The excitement turns to frustration after several days of reaching for just the write words and falling short time after time. The bright ideas seem to fade a little when the family and friends don’t find your first chapter exciting enough to want to listen to you talk about it for three hours non-stop. But if you really do want to write, you must make yourself write faithfully and regularly, regardless of the struggles involved. If you sit at your keyboard three hours and type onto the screen only one sentence worth keeping, you have accomplished writing a sentence that never existed before.

And therein lies the intrinsic value of writing. Everyone who writes becomes a creator. Once you have written an original piece – no matter how small or how large – you have created something that never before existed! And it does not matter if anyone else reads it. It does not matter if anyone else likes it. It does not matter whether it ever sees a publisher’s imprint or a bookstore shelf. The fact remains that you have created an entity that never before existed. I repeat that point because it is a powerful reality that very few writers recognize.

And another related fact – one that many unpublished writers in particular seem to miss — is that once you have created a written product, you are a writer. You’re not “going to be” a writer. You’re not a “would-be” writer. You’re not an “aspiring” writer. You are a writer. You are an author. You are a creator. When you do recognize these two truth, they will empower you to keep creating and to create even more effectively.

Author Jules Renard said, “Writing is the only profession where no one considers you ridiculous if you earn no money.” Well, I’m not sure that’s entirely true. When I was earning no money, I had a significant number of people tell me that I should put my writing aside and apply myself more diligently to “real work.” That being said, I would have to come into agreement with Mr. Renard to some extent anyway, because for the writer who feels the desire strongly enough, it really is not about money at all. It is about pouring out the rich treasure that is inside, just waiting for its release. If you truly are a writer, you must write – for yourself.

But to return to my main point, once you have realized that you are a writer and that you have created something that had no existence before your efforts, you will then come to realize a third truth that is just as important: As a writer, you have a heavy responsibility to your readers. From the moment an individual picks up your work and reads the first sentence, you begin to influence that person – for good or evil. And the more of your work people read, the greater your influence grows.

So it is important to remember that, although you may feel you are writing for yourself, if you intend to allow your work to be read by anyone else at all, you are responsible for what that work does to influence that reader. There is a passage in the Bible, Luke 12:48, that says, “For unto whomsoever much is given, of him shall be much required.”

Although the statement is found within the pages of Scripture, it is a truth outside of those pages as well. One does not have to be of the Christian faith to recognize the validity of the point being made. In accordance with that law of life, when we are endowed with the powerful gifts and talents that allow us to create through the written word, we then become accountable for what we do with that word.

QUILL & SCROLL - sepiaAs long ago as 1839, English author Edward Bulwer-Lytton stated this truth most succinctly when he wrote, “The pen is mightier than the sword.” Centuries prior to that date, Martin Luther proved the truth of that statement when his words shook a corrupt religious system to its very roots – as did Thomas Paine in his endeavors to move men in the “New World” to fight for their freedom. By the use of the pen (or keyboard) nations can be established, but societies can be destroyed just as easily. Personal lives can be blessed and lifted to a new level, or they can be pulled down into sordidness and filth – depending on what flows from the point of that pen.

A poem I wrote not long ago echos this truth as well:

Weapons

One man may wield with ease a sharp-honed sword,
And drawing blood, strike death with that long knife.
Another for his weapon chooses words,
Yet with dead aim, he too destroys a life.

‘Twould seem that power resides in reservoirs
And can be drawn and used for peace or strife.
Ah, yes, and ’tis the Master Wordsmith’s Word
That teaches in our words is death and life. *

Powerful? Yes. Exciting? Indeed. Scary? You bet. Because with so much power comes an equal amount of responsibility. We must never lose sight of the fact that words really do create — for good or evil. And words move people — to good or evil.

But isn’t it a great joy to know that the power works both ways? As writers, we have the opportunity to build lives – to bring encouragement, hope, revelation, and even laughter. Allow me to quote from one more passage of scripture. The book of Proverbs, chapter 17, verse 22, says, “A joyful heart is good medicine.” And in the last century, medical science told us that scientific tests had proven that laughter really does change the physical condition of the body in a positive way. Yes, even writing something that makes another person laugh can change a life.

If you want to be a writer, you are aspiring to a high calling. Go for it, always remembering to use your power wisely.

And as you pick up that pen or set your hands on that keyboard, you can count on two things coming your way for sure:

# 1 — Frustrating, taxing, aggravating challenges.

# 2 – The exhilarating, elevating, life-renewing joy of having created something out of yourself that never before existed. There is no other experience like it in the world!

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*Scripture reference: Proverbs 18:21

This article is an excerpt from the curriculum Releasing the Creative Writer in You, © 2013 by Sandra Conner.

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100-Word Challenge For Grown Ups – Week 90 — ‘The Written Word’

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The prompt this week:   “… the points were sharp …”

 

 

The Written Word

The quills were ancient. She’d found them locked in a closet of the abby. But the points were sharp, the monks having taken great care of them.

Mara sighed.  Remember, Robert? … Computers and photocopiers?  It was all so easy?”

Yeah … life before the E-bombs. Who would have dreamed our electronic infrastructure was so unprotected!”

If the new dictator hadn’t confiscated all the manual typewriters and pencils as well, we could at least communicate to some extent!”

Picking up a quill, Robert replied: “Well, this is how our ancestors printed letters and books. We come from the same stock. So –” dipping his quill into the ink – “let’s get started.”

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Julia’s 100-Word Challenge For Grown Ups is a lot of fun. Hop over to her site to get the instructions for how to take part:
http://jfb57.wordpress.com/2013/05/20/100-word-challenge-for-grown-ups-week84/