Today’s prompt word is “fog.” The form we’ve been asked to use is the elegy — with strong encouragement to try using elegiac couplets. And the technique assigned for today is the metaphor.
I’ve offered my piece in a slightly modified elegiac couplet, and the only occurrence of a metaphor is in the second line. But since this is the poem that came to me, I did not try to force myself to comply with more exact or more numerous metaphors. I sort of liked the piece the way it came. So, dear readers, that’s the way I’m serving it to you. (And to set your mind at rest, I will tell you that the poem is NOT based on personal experience — I’m thankful to say.)
Out from the fog and the daze I am struggling to make my way.
Scrabbling to gather the pieces of my tattered life.
Once I was warm with a love that imbued me with happiness.
Now only memories haunt me and cause my heart strife.
I sought to hold you, to own you, to bind you to me for all time.
Giving no freedom, no breathing space, no chance to fly.
Smothering you with my paranoid jealousy; making you hate me;
Turning your poor heart to stone, and that caused you to die.
Oh, how I long for just one day to relive my tragic mistakes –
One hour to whisper that finally my lesson I’ve learned.
One precious moment to bare my soul as I have never before,
Offering you only the unselfish love that you earned.
But wretch that I am, I have come to the truth only when it’s too late.
Repentant in heart, but with no where to go to confess.
For cold, ‘neath the ground you have lain all these months, and your ears cannot hear.
I’m eternally lost in this fog of remorse, and there is no rest.